No one could predict the monster Isabelle would become, but its the backstory, and characters accounts that will help the reader understand the whys and wherefores... Even so, it's Isabelle's hard heart, and despicable treatment of those around her that will make it difficult to sympathise. She's a twenty year old, hell-bent on seducing, her benefactor, Mr Arthur Essie.
No one will get in her way... No-One.
This week the word count has been healthy. The ideas and direction of Chapter 5, have flowed nicely...
Watching, and waiting from the perimeter of the Garden Party, Isabelle knew he'd arrive soon. She was fed up of hanging around, she had plans, and he would listen. It was her time. Then, she saw him enter the party holding his wife's hand, smiling, as he introduced her to business colleagues.
Watching, and waiting from the perimeter of the Garden Party, Isabelle knew he'd arrive soon. She was fed up of hanging around, she had plans, and he would listen. It was her time. Then, she saw him enter the party holding his wife's hand, smiling, as he introduced her to business colleagues.
Isabelle's fury exploded in her chest, it burned, she felt as if she was on fire and it made her eyes water.
She never cried, not ever.
MJ Ewen
She never cried, not ever.
MJ Ewen
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